hi can someone pls help me with this statement for its been an hour and I can't think on how will I expand the idea of the statement.

Btw this is the statement:" To expand this further, graduating from Senior High is a large stepping stone and is also an added pressure, considering that the students are already moving forward towards deciding what strand will best fit for what they're passionate about."

Pls help, I really need it since this is a research. ​