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Protect yourself to protect others, say Philippine COVID 19 survivors

Worrying about their family, is the worst part of testing covid 19, say 2 survivors from the Philippines, Drew and Yang
Drew,35 and father of one, work in the aviation industry. After developing symptoms , he test positive for covid 19 symptoms.
“ The stress and anxiety was very difficult to handle because stress and anxiety I didn’t know if I was infect my family already. I worry that my family might not be able to handle what I was going through if they got infected by me”.
“That’s what scare me the most”.
Meanwhile, Yang, 26 , a manufacturing employee who lived with her parent and other family member, begins wearing a face mask and avoid touching the handrails in public transport as corona virus case roses.
Still, three days after her birthday she becomes ill. She had to tell her parents that she tested positive.
“I see the sadness and felt of defeat in their eyes.”
“Why did I got. “ the disease?,’’she asks herself at the time “ What if I infect them?” “ What if I died and left my family because of this?”
After weeks of isolation, Yang recovers. When her swab tests came back ne negative, she cry tears of relieves and her father also cries.
Today, she wanted everyone to protect themself and protect others.
Drew, who also follow the advice to isolate, also recovers. The experience also teaches him a lesson.
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